Close your eyes
Imagine you are on the beach during a sunny day
You find a spot you would like to rest
Lay out your blanket
Lay on it and start to sleep
You are awakened by a familiar voice
You open your eyes from your beach sleep and see a close friend
You're reminiscing with your friend is now over
OPEN YOUR EYES!
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write about how you felt from the moment you stepped foot on the imaginary beach to the moment you saw your close friend.
Response:
I was feeling anxious to find a spot to sit.
I felt relieved when I found somewhere to put my blanket.
I was excited to rest.
When I saw my friend, I wanted to cry and laugh at the same time.
I am very lonely in the city sometimes.
It was nice to see a friendly face.
I was kind of sad to open my eyes.
Comments (1)
your response is very good and reads like a poem.
(a photo would add some extra depth)
Posted by Andy Cox | November 26, 2007 10:35 PM
Posted on November 26, 2007 22:35